LOVE THIS!!!! Go ladies - you rock!

Very clever, loved the camera angles and great job with the kids.

This was unbelievable. Congratulations no matter what happens!!!!!!

Great job on the video! I know first hand how long it takes to complete! Good Luck.

Wow! This is great! You go girls!

go girls!!! you rock!

tight bobert is not my name

What a great message and professional video! Amazing work--I'm jealous that I didn't think of it!!!

oh my gosh that was so cute!! I absoutly loved it !!
Go Girls!!!

What a powerful message you delivered with very talented students and teacher! Congratulations!!!!!!!

How adorable! Great job!

Very cute but i'm not sure how it addresses the contest.

Well, I'm impressed. How lucky for you kids to have a teacher who can help you put together a piece like this.

Sorry-Just one more comment. I looked at this again and the ending when they put the Interwrite symbol/logo together is absolutely AMAZING!

This is great! Clearly collaborative between teacher and students AND cleverly creative with targeting the next generation's women. You get my vote!

This video is so stinking cute! It is very realistic of gender stereotypes and it's nice to see a male teacher who finally addresses this topic! By far the best video--AMAZING!

Mr. Colosi, you and your students did such a wonderful job on this video. I absolutely loved it and have watched it @ least 10 times. Good luck and great job!!! Friend in Charlotte, NC

wow what an amazing video, great gob

This is soooooo impressive, very original and a TRUE fact! I am hoping to see this at the next step!!! Good Luck!

What a bunch of cute, and talented students(and teacher of course). This took a lot of work and time and I hope it pays off for you-IT SHOULD!

Very cute! That took a ton of work.

Not only do you and your class present an important issue, but it was done in an original and creative way. You definately raised the bar with this video. Excellent work !!!!!

Cool.

good message

Fantastic project... you get my vote!!

This one should definitely be one of the top 5. Different, great message and the most original.

I think that your video is wonderful. Very creative and entertaining.

Fishers
Very fun video, good luck

I've watched this one several times- great job!!

Just showed my classes this video and they went wild, especially the girls. Thank you for sending out this message and hopefully getting more girls into technology where many do excel . Hope to see this in the top five. Great job and good luck!

Nice video...very cute...looks like your teacher is very technology savvy...good job

Awesome video. I voted for you guys! Good luck

That was soooo cute! i voted for you! Please vote for us (were in group 6-8)
http://contest.interwritelearning.com/co...

These girls are amazing, I hope they win!!!!

goooddd jobb; veryy cutteee . !!!

Great video! Go Girls! I had to laugh at the first scene with the girls walking up in sunglasses, outside...

SO great! I love it!

Mr. Colosi, what a great video!!! You and your class have worked very hard and have presented a great show. I voted for you and really hope you win the big prize, but even if you don't, you can be very proud of your work. You are such beautiful people.

EXCELLENT!!!! You should be very proud!!

What a wonderful video, You girls did a great job.

THATS SO ADORABLE!! YOUR WAS AWESOME!

Love it -- easily the best one here - hands dows

My best to you in Mr. Colosi's 1st grade class! You produced a very entertaining and clever video. I can imagine hearing your song across the air waves! It has a very catchy tune. Win or lose, you should be proud of your hard work! Good Luck!

Love this video! Great message and great work. You go girls!!

As a mother of a five year old girl, this hit home. Great job, girls!

Wow. This is amazing! Thanks for making me cry. Good tears, of course! Good luck. This is by FAAAAAR the best one!

Mr. Colosi- this is phenomenal! WOW! You and your class are obvioulsy very talented and dedicated! Good luck! You deserve it! www.simplyfunkidsparties.com

Mr. Colosi - you have an amazing group of kids!! You all did AWESOME!! Good luck!!

Great Job! You have so much to be proud of. Just the fact that you took the time, the love and caring of what you do shows on your face. I'm sure that you are a wonderful teacher.

Fantastic, wonderful video. Great job done by all. Good Luck !!

This submission is far more easy to listen to and enjoy. It gets to the heart of the matter regarding technology needs for all classrooms in all schools if we are to keep up with societal expectations for performance. Other submissions just do not equal the student input to the video and no others match the enthusiasm that Mr. Colosi's students have displayed and inspired. Rock on!

VMPeltier

Great video for an even better cause! Good luck to the 1st grade class at Canandaigua!

Incredible talent from Canadaigua's 1st grade class and from Mr. Colosi! I know you poured your heart into this video. It's quite evident and it's very impressive work, the very best from the list of finalists! You can all be very proud! The video quality is exceptional work and it's obvious the children have dedicated many hours to getting the rhythm and diction perfect! Best of luck to you!

An amazing teacher with an amazing message...
Congrats to the children and Mr. Colosi for all the hard work and dedication it took to make this video.

I agree with "janelleisawesome," this is definitely the best video. It's nice to see kids this age interested in this kind of technology. I like that you kept the attention on the kids too. Great job!

great video; good use of Final Cut --Adespo

great job with the video. you and your class did a great job...good luck

I produce TV Commercials in Boston, MA and think this video is as good as it gets! Go Mr. Colosi and his 1st grade class!!! You ROCK!!!

This is so cute. This school really deserves the technology required to get rid of the 5:1 ratio. I'm voting for this video too, because it is close to my home town! The editin was fantastic. Good Luck CA!!

This is so cute and very well done! I really hope you win, you certainly deserve it! Good luck!

This is great. This school as put in the hard work and deserve to win. I hope you win because you certainly deserve to. Good Luck!

This video is awesome and like the Red Sox deserves to win! Mr. Colosi's students are really lucky to have a teacher who is so talented and dedicated.

rock on kids, rock on...

Great video guys... Us SUNY Brockport students are wishing you the best of luck in this contest... Bring it back to NY

Great! Go girls go!

Great job girls!!! Very creative!! I hope you win, you deserve it!!!!!

I am so glad that my boys are attending Canandaigua schools. The would be very lucky to get a great teacher like Mr. Colosi.

That is a great video, and that definately deserves the big W.... GOOD LUCK!!!!

Congratulations Mr. Colosi and your 1st grade students ! A world-class production from an amazing group of students and their awesome teacher ! We're proud of you !

Thats really good. Great Job kids!

You Go Rich. This is a great acheivment for any teacher.

So glad to see this made it to the finals. You have all of my College video classes behind you. Good luck!

Phenomenal video, way to go Mr. Colosi's class. GIRLS RULE!! Hope you win.

Great video! I love the creativity into the song and camera shots!

Awesome job kids!!! Mr. Colosi's class did an awesome job!!!

go Rich! Nice job.

good luck, and excellent video...

GREAT JOB! You serve us proud in Canandaigua! Rock on Girls!!!!

A great video! They kids did a wonderful job and Mr Colosi too. Well done

Canandaigua is proud of everyone invoved! Thank you Mr. Colosi

Great video and great ideas. Keep up what you're doing. We're proud of you and your class, Mr. Colosi

Amazing video kids and Mr. Colosi!! Good luck!!

Awesome... Good luck Rich! from a retiree ! I.Blair

This is awesome!!!!! It is a shame that girls are still such a minority in technology!!! I certainly hope the clas wins, and both boys and girls in teh class got something out of making this video!!!!

You rock. You got my vote. Your right they can not hold us back girls. I hope your class wins. I can not wait to see you video at 6:00 news. My mom works in you class room.

From,
Eribear

Loved every minute of it...I'm keeping my fingers crossed...GOOD LUCK!

This video should be on the national news. Mr. Colosi, you are a wonderful example of a dedicated teacher! I teach third grade (near you, actually) and can truly appreciate all your hard work for your class. Kudos to you and I hope you win! :)

I just showed this to my 8 year old daughter and now she is singing this catchy song and dancing all over the house. She LOVES technology....you Rock Canandaigua!

The other videos in this category are nice...but we all know that NONE come close to this amazing project. This video has the best message, the best use of technology, and is clearly the most creative. My class in Maryland has already been inspired by you all. GREAT JOB!

Awesome video with a great message! What talented First Graders. I thought your video was the best of all the submissions. I hope you win!

You go girls! Loved it, they did a great job Canandaigua.

Wow, I've never seen so much technology! No wonder your video looks so professional.

You make your school proud! Hope you win!

Good luck ! Way to represent NY

I'm behind this 100%.

Awesome job.I hope you win. Keep up the great work.

I think this is great!
I voted for you :)

great job, good luck, Go CA school.

nicely done! Good luck

You all did such a great job! Good luck!!!

Awesome job ladies...and classmates! What a wonderful teacher to collaborate with you in this great opportunity!

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G job!!
Well done to Mr. Colosi and all his help!

Mr. Colosi and friends, You and your hard work rock!! You are winners no matter what! Thank you for doing something so special and creative! You inspire us all! Mrs. Schaefer Grade 2 Canandaigua

I think you got this one tucked away! Great and sooo creative! Congrats either way!!!

Great Jobs Girls! Girls rule!!

Nice job everyone! This video is excellent! I'm going to show all of my 7th grade students down here in Fairfax County, Virginia. Keep up the good work!
-Ashley Goble (CA '98)

You go girls!!!!!!u r so cute!im in the 6-9 catagory, techno intergration is my vid!

Very impressive video! Gender bias is a long standing problem in the schools. Your efforts will help make this a non-factor. Keep up the good work.

great work with this video--It's great to see a focus on what you could do with all the technology in the classroom and not as much of a focus on what you do not have (which I'm sure could have been showcased as well!) Your expertise in the tech area will help these students, boys and girls alike, become digital learners. Although your video has the most votes, it also surpasses the criteria needed for creativity points and collaboration with students and teacher--what a fun class. Thanks for your efforts in trying to improve the entire school district. CONGRATS ON YOUR SUCCESS!!!!

I am very impressed with the children/teacher involved with this. You can be very proud of this accomplishment. GO GIRLS!!! Maybe you could teacher me some technology (Computer skills) ?

Cute video, did not like the total idea concept, would have preferred it be for the students not pushing "girl power", also saw lots of technology already at this school, they don't appear to be lacking in technology, many other schools more deserving.

As a women in the technolgy field I think you message is spot on! Go Girls - it was nice you let the boys participate. You definitely have a great teacher too.

What a wonderful job! Whatever happens in the contest, you're already winners to me! Good luck... you deserve to win!

Great job! You go girls!!!

I LOVE this!!!!! I just emailed this out to a ton of lady gymnasts!!! I know they will enjoy watching your fantastic video!!!!
Good luck!!!!!!!!!!

What an inspiration for girls of ALL ages! These are lucky girls (and boys) to be in Mr. Colosi's class. Excellent submission!

Have to agree with joanjet. Great video but just somehow seems out of place in this kind of competition.

great video! It takes some creative thinking to get across multible messages. Great use of technology and where it is taking us ALL ! I like the way you brought the "boys" into supporting roles in this whole endeavor; bringing everyone together to work together and letting technology help make it happen. Good message. Great job!

Wow! How adorable!!!! My daughter was grinning from ear to ear when she watched the fantastic video!!! She would love to have Mr. Colosi as a teacher! Great teachers must run in the family ;-) BTW we miss Janelle!!!!

A proud HRE Labrador in Holly Springs, NC

Cute video, but the contest rules state that it should be 3 minutes or less.

This is a fantastic video! I loved every second of it! This is the best one for sure!!

Your Class makes the Upstate, NY AREA proud!!! VOTE NOW...

jsmith, they are OK See: (c) uploading a music video (maximum 5 minutes) that is a parody of any song of the Entrant’s choice by demonstrating how different kinds of technology are being used in the classroom.

VOTE VOTE VOTE!

What a message! Loved it - thanks for sending it my way....

GREAT JOB!!!! What a fantastic entry and amazing opportunity!! You have my vote!!

That was an amazing video and all the kids did very well. Mr. Colosi, 1st grade class is fantastic. Job well done..You have my vote...

Nice message. Good luck!

Thats was absolutely awesome! Nice work gals!
I am truly impressed. I am in Marketing and that was one of the best things I have seen in awhile. Wow! You definatly have my vote!

Great Job Mr. Colosi and class. That is an Awesome video...keep up the good work with your students and best of luck!!!!!

I sat there, watching and listening, completely stunned by this superb video! Congratulations!!! You have a lot to be proud of!!! . . . Splinter

Terrific job! Really impressive video!

Hello guys! I am a student at Canandaigua and I loved your video! I am putting my vote in!

cutest thing i have ever seen! votedd!

GREAT JOB!!!!!

Great video Class!!! Great message! Best of luck! I hope you win, you deserve it!

oh my gosh! that was so cute! u girls rock! i hope you win! good luck!

Mr. Colosi are you allowed to post this in youtube? may help!

Girls rule (often), boys drool (occasionally). In either case, these students and their teacher are to be congratulated for stating the obvious. Gender disparity is unfounded and unfair (see first sentence). Fight the fair fight, and don't succumb to societal stereotypes. If this video doesn't prevail, Interwrite needs a new mission statement and/or marketing director. Good Luck Mr. Colosi and kids.

so cute! you guys are gonna win!

that is sooooooooo good GREAT JOB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) ;)

Best of luck this was great!

the kids did an awsome job, and it looks like Bridget will make a great actress!!!! you go girls

awesome video ,we should all be proud of our canandaigua kids,there the best!!!!!

Superfantabulous video! Rock On lil sistas! I'm a fan of techno-digital gadgets myself. I just know you are gonna win! Woo Hoo!!! Kudos Mr. Colosi! You Rock Too! P.S. Please don't take off for my spelling and grammar. : )

Great job!

Super-Duper Job Kids, This is professional and will get my vote.
Great Job Mr. Colosi. Great message and powerful.

Wow, way to go girls! Great Job all of you and Mr. Colosi! I totally enjoyed and shared with my kids. MA Lyons, NY

What a GREAT JOB by all of you in Mr. Colosi's class. GOOD LUCK to all of you I hope you WIN!!!! You definetly got my VOTE!!!!

Amazing Job Mr.Colosi and class! You should all be proud! Good Luck! :)

AWESOME...AWESOME...GIRLS RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice Job girls you ROCK!!!!

Your whole class is awesome!!!!!! The sky's the limit girls...and boys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO FOR IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful job, first graders!! Mr. Colosi, your former principal applauds you!!

Great job on the video. This obviously took a ton of work from both the teacher and students. This video has a great message. I hope CA wins!!!

What a wonderful, wonderful thing!!!!!! Good luck to the whole class!!!!!

Great job ladies... We at SUNY Brockport are wishing you the best of luck in this contest... Bring it back to NY

Thanks for putting us on the map!!!! It's really a great job!!! The best of luck!

Richie, I'm glad the Messenger did a story on this. I hope you win!

Great video ladies... You girls rock!!!! Wish you the best of luck ! you have are vote. Hope you win..

Very nice lob!!

Fantastic job, girls (and guys)!!!!! The video is totally awesome; I love the message... We need it... Keep it up! All the best, I really do hope you win... :D

Great Video....Good Luck and shoot for the Stars

fantastic job everyone! hopefully we win Canandaigua!

this is realy good..
great job girls and boys
good luck!
:D

way to go girls!

This is by far the best message and video, Great Job!!

Great job Mr colosi for being a good teacher to my little girl jen and all the other kids they all love you. great job on the video hope we win !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jens dad Sal Rosato

I saw your class on 13Wham this morning. WOW.....you've got my vote. This is incredible. These students are soooooooooo lucky!

Good Luck to all of you....you are already winners!

You should absolutely submit this video to Good Morning America!!! They would love it. Good luck in the competition, you deserve to win!

We loved your video!! Congratulations on an outstanding job!:)
Love & cheers from your C.A. Cheerleaders

this is a cute one!

Fantastic message! Superbly done!

Best of luck to all of you!:)

What an awsome job you all did, way to go. You guys deserve to win .
The Bordwells!

Excellent job, and a very important issue. I wish you all the best.
Go Girls Go!

Terrific video! All the best to Mr. Colosi and his students - they are all truly amazing!

This is such an awesome video! Great job to BOTH the girls and boys! I really hope your class wins! You definitely deserve it!

Great Video, great job to the class....

Awesome video. Great job to all who were involved.

Showing my support for fellow geneseo-an. Good luck and great video!

What a great video! Geneseo produces the greatest teachers in the world, without a doubt! Best of luck with the contest ... you clearly deserve the win!

Wow - very impressive! And with such young kids too! Good luck...from another Geneseo alumnus.

Way to go Geneseo!

Geneseo '93 checking in...good luck!

What an AMAZING video. By far the best in this category. You have my vote.

Good luck!
-Geneseo '07

Great video! Best of luck from a 1996 Geneseo graduate!

Very creative. Makes me proud to have gone to the same college as people who drive things like this. Geneseo '77

Loved it! Keep up the great work! ~Geneseo '02

Great job! Best of luck winning this contest! - Geneseo '98

Great message! Best of luck! Geneseo '86

I hope you guys win! Geneseo '07

that was awesome!

Congratulations on a great job!!! The kids are amazing and you must be doing an amazing job with them! I love the girl power! Geneseo'86

Glad to see a fellow alum doing a GREAT job - and as a mother, it is also great to see a positive male influence on young girls! Good luck!
Geneseo '93

Such a great job! Good luck!
Geneseo '95

Awesome! I'm excited to show my first grade daughter this after school today! Excellent video and great message!
Geneseo '90

Great job conveying an important message! It looks like your class had a wonderful time making this video.

Great job and good luck. Some very talented kids!!!!! Future looks brighter when you see kids this involved and enthusiastic !!
Good luck!!!
Geneseo '74

Very clever. More power to girls in math and science!!

That was great! Just showed my some students and teachers at my middle school down in Virginia and they loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Geneseo '01

Nice job with this - looks like it was lots of fun - I'll be sharing with my kids tonight! Good luck with the competition.
-Geneseo '84

So cute. I'm a Geneseo grad (class of 2001) and my husband grew up in Canandaigua, so we're pulling for ya... Good luck!!

Great job! Absolutely loved the creativity, the message - what a great class and a fantastic teacher! Good luck with the contest!! Geneseo '85

Hi, I am currently a teacher in FL- graduated SUNY Geneseo in '02 and think this video is great! Good job!

Very cute video! I'm a 4th grade teacher on Long Island and a Geneseo '00 graduate.

Great Job and Good Luck! I am a SUNY Geneseo Grad - class of 99 - and was in RLK with Rosie! Hope she's doing great!
Theresa (Shinners) Miller

that is sooo cute!!! i hope u guys win!!!
GIRL POWER!!!

Nice job and Good Luck!!!!! Geneseo '90

It is great to see that Geneseo keeps turning out awesome teachers. My 8th grade students just participated on a project on the digital divide here in NC. I wish I had known about the contest. I hope your class wins!

Geneseo '96

Awesome!!! I think that you are all definitely winners. Don't let anything hold you back!!!

Great job, and such a great message for both boys and girls! I think it's just as important that the boys see the girls as "tech savvy" as it is for the girls to see themselves that way. Best of luck!
Geneseo '95

Great job - what more could you expect from a Geneseo grad? :)
Good luck!

Geneseo '00

Nice job! As a former tech teacher in my school in NYC, I experienced the tech gap almost daily, Youand your students should be very proud. Here's hoping you win!

Class of '75